When a person starts a career search and make a cover letter for an internship position they sometimes make mistakes on their cover letter. It is helpful to know what pitfalls to look out for.
Here is one example of a bad sentence in a bad cover letter:
Fused value-added deliverables with performance based data while promoting personal growth initiatives and team objectives.
Why is it bad? In an attempt to impress an employer people sometime use words they would never otherwise use or over use buzzwords. The result is the letter becomes confusing gibberish that fails to impress.
What to do about it? Easy. Use conversational English.